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and this bizarre review
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ThedarknigtSoul Sat 03 Nov 2018 06:01PM EDT
I honestly did not like this fanfic. It does not look like a StevexNatasha story, but a story about Tony x Nat or Tony x Steve, nothing strange if I read over his other stories, with Stony-Steve x Tony, or trios. What was that Natasha scene with Tony at the beginning and then decide to change Steve? Nat looks like a bitch here, does not she know Pepper? in the movie Tony and Pepper are engaged and it is even theorized that she is pregnant because of Tony's dream. And now this? Steve might think badly of this, because it would be almost a disloyalty to Pepper, and it's ridiculous that Nat feels disloyal to Bruce, when she was with Pepper. And is Nat supposed to have a Norwegian boyfriend who pays for everything? Your money, hotels, etc. in exchange for sex (they never mention it, but can you guess)? And Steve is fine with that? Steve has better ideals and beliefs than that, I doubt he will be seduced to forgive that. horrible reading, not what will be the thoughts or beliefs of the author, but reading this was a pain. honestly
ThedarknigtSoul Sat 03 Nov 2018 06:01PM EDT
I honestly did not like this fanfic. It does not look like a StevexNatasha story, but a story about Tony x Nat or Tony x Steve, nothing strange if I read over his other stories, with Stony-Steve x Tony, or trios. What was that Natasha scene with Tony at the beginning and then decide to change Steve? Nat looks like a bitch here, does not she know Pepper? in the movie Tony and Pepper are engaged and it is even theorized that she is pregnant because of Tony's dream. And now this? Steve might think badly of this, because it would be almost a disloyalty to Pepper, and it's ridiculous that Nat feels disloyal to Bruce, when she was with Pepper. And is Nat supposed to have a Norwegian boyfriend who pays for everything? Your money, hotels, etc. in exchange for sex (they never mention it, but can you guess)? And Steve is fine with that? Steve has better ideals and beliefs than that, I doubt he will be seduced to forgive that. horrible reading, not what will be the thoughts or beliefs of the author, but reading this was a pain. honestly